9/21

On monday we meet up with all our group members.We all shared our email papers.We read it to our whole group and asked what needed to be fixed.It was intresting knowing what kind of mistakes we made in our papers and sharing information in how to better them.It really helped me alot and I'm sure it also did for my team members.I think my paper sounded kind of good but it just needed to be extended and a little bit of more details.We all wrote in our typed email paper what we needed to fix.I even forgot to thank the teacher for reading my paper and also my contact to were she could reach me.Well that same monday I had gone to the writing lab and typed my draft paper.If I wouldve know I needed that information I wouldve fixed my paper.The teacher came to the resque after she saw us talking about our papers and what we needed to fix.She really helped us out and showed us a little extra in how to extend our paper.After that I added a little bit of more information and made my paper sound better and more profetional.Well,thats what I think.After class I went to the writing center and schedule my appointment for the real paper thats due on friday.I just need that little bit of help to make my paper sound better but I'm sure with one of those teachers in the writing lab is going to help me in getting that "A" in this work.So far three in our group have our papers but hopefully with the help of eachother we all four get our work done.